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Noted Nest

The Midnight Train

Updated: Oct 5, 2024

By Vaani Dosi



The silence of the abandoned train station was oppressive, broken only by the distant sound of an approaching train. The town of Black Hollow had long since been abandoned, its residents vanished without a trace years ago. Yet tonight, a single train was scheduled to arrive, and Ava was determined to uncover its secrets.


Ava, a journalist with a taste for the macabre, had spent months researching Black Hollow's mysterious disappearance. The town's legends spoke of a ghost train that came only once every decade, collecting souls to take them to a place of eternal torment. She had dismissed these stories as mere folklore until she found a diary from a missing resident that detailed the train's last visit.


As the train pulled into the station, its old, rusty wheels screeched against the tracks. A chill ran down Ava's spine as the doors creaked open, revealing a darkness deeper than the night itself. Summoning all her courage, she stepped inside, grabbing her camera and flashlight.


The interior was as decrepit as the exterior, with torn seats and shattered windows. An overwhelming sense of dread filled the air. Ava walked through the carriage, each step echoing ominously. She noticed that every surface was covered in a thin layer of ash. Her flashlight flickered, casting eerie shadows that seemed to move on their own.


Suddenly, the train jolted, and the doors slammed shut behind her. The lights inside the train flickered to life, revealing ghostly figures seated in the rows ahead. Their hollow eyes turned towards her, and a low murmur filled the carriage—a chorus of whispers from the damned.


Ava's heart pounded as she moved forward, trying to document the apparitions. One figure, a woman in tattered clothes, pointed towards the back of the train. With a shaky breath, Ava followed the gesture, her flashlight revealing a door she hadn't seen before.


She opened it, revealing a narrow passageway that led to a dimly lit room. Inside, a figure stood with its back to her, its presence exuding a malevolent energy. The figure turned slowly, revealing a face that was a twisted mirror of her own. It smiled, a cold, lifeless smile.


"Welcome, Ava," the doppelganger whispered. "We've been waiting for you."


Before she could react, the train lurched forward, speeding into the darkness. The windows showed not the countryside but swirling vortexes of shadow and flame. Ava's flashlight fell from her hand as she stumbled, the doppelganger's laughter echoing around her.


Desperately, Ava tried to find a way out, but the train's interior seemed to stretch endlessly. The whispers grew louder, more insistent. She could feel the cold hands of the ghosts brushing against her, pulling her deeper into their world.


Suddenly, the train screeched to a halt. Ava looked out of a window, and what she saw made her blood run cold. The train had stopped at another station, eerily similar to the one she had boarded at, but this one was filled with ghostly figures waiting to board. Among them, she recognized faces from her research—people who had vanished from Black Hollow.


As the ghosts began to board the train, Ava's doppelganger stepped forward, reaching out a hand. "It's time to join us, Ava," it said, its voice a chilling echo of her own. "The next stop is eternity."


Ava backed away, but there was nowhere to go. The train doors closed again, and with a final, terrifying jolt, it began to move. She could feel the pull of the darkness, the cold hands of the dead closing in.


Just as she was about to be engulfed, she noticed something on the floor—a small, glowing key. She grabbed it, feeling a surge of hope. But as she turned to find the lock, the train's interior began to warp and twist, the walls closing in around her.


The last thing she saw before everything went black was her doppelganger's face, smiling with satisfaction. The train hurtled into the abyss, taking Ava with it. And then, a sudden, deafening silence.


Back at the station, the train vanished into thin air, leaving no trace of its passage. The only evidence of Ava's presence was her camera, lying on the platform, its last photo capturing the ghostly figures boarding the midnight train. The screen flickered, showing a message: "See you next decade."


The mystery of Black Hollow deepened, and the legend of the midnight train continued to haunt those who dared to seek the truth. And somewhere, deep in the shadows, Ava's story was just beginning.


By Vaani Dosi



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