By Amitagni Ghosh
I make my way towards the huge wooden door. It’s overgrown with vines
and slathered with green algae. This was the main entrance to Forever
Chocolate, an abandoned factory that my friends and I would call our
secret hideout. The path to the factory is covered in dried, brown leaves
with a sprinkle of wilted white jasmine. The huge oak tree that once was
one of the town’s biggest treasures now stood leafless and barren. But
tucked beneath the gray woolen sky, there is still a warmth to the factory
that reminds me of a home.
The paint on the soft wooden door inside is deep like a mother’s care for
her child. The flakes peel at random depths showing different sun-baked
hues underneath. In this way, in its flaws it has somehow become more
beautiful.
The hinges on the door creaks as I close it behind me. It’s squeal echoes
through the cross beams that struggle to fight the sagging roof above. The
windows no longer beckon light inside, no longer lift the obscurity that the
walls impose. Instead, they add to the growing sense of damp and dark
that permits the chill wind to penetrate through.
As I wander around in solitude, I see a newly made bird's nest with baby
birds soundly sleeping. They were the most vibrant yellow I’ve ever seen
with the softest accents of white. I walk upstairs as they creek beneath
me. My eyes immediately turn to the carving that I had done on one of the
wooden walls with my best friend. “4lifers” it said. There were old, dirty
and damp clothes on the floor that let out an almost unbearable odor. Not
able to stand it anymore, I ran into one of the bathrooms. The bathroom
was a celebration of white and chrome, but with the half broken mirrors it
wasn’t the most appealing. The sinks looked as though they would fall at
any moment. Water dripped down from one of the taps. The continuous
sound of water dripping after 5 seconds of each drop, tearing the silence
was painful to my ears.
I came back downstairs and walked out the front door of the factory.
Looking back and staring at its height, a feeling of sadness comes upon
me. I rest at the arch of the factory and wonder who could have left this
beautiful building to rot.
By Amitagni Ghosh
I agree or relate to that feeling you’ve expressed so much, like when you hang back from the crowd and the rubble and see what we're leaving behind, it strikes a pang within your chest