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Noted Nest

Before I Lay Down

Updated: Oct 3, 2024

By Navin



February 13th 1954

Day 88

Perhaps the Final Entry

Dear Diary,

I really thought I could make it till day 100. But, right now, I don’t think so. I can feel

this is the end. Now that I think of it, surviving 88 days is a huge achievement.

Amidst feeling extremely devastated, loss, pain and suffering, this little satisfaction

from surviving this long makes it alright.

So, today marks the 6th day being stuck up this hill; those things are still swarming

the valley. I finished the last of the roti and jam yesterday. I know I said I’d save them

for a few more days, but I don’t know, yesterday I felt a little bit more hungry. I still

have 2 pieces of bread though. Actually, they might be stale. It’s fine. Oh God, I really

miss my grandma’s Piri Piri chicken. And our homemade Wine. I would eat a heavy

dinner on Friday nights, wear my oversized sweater and snuggle up in my bed as I

read the novel 1984. But now, I'm wearing torn and dirty clothes and it’s cold, really

cold, and this wind is ruining my hair which is already completely messed up.

Actually, all of this that is happening right now is a little similar to that novel.

I had to push Jayan’s corpse down the hill; I couldn’t bear the stench. But I’m

keeping the pack of cigarettes I found in his pockets. After pushing him, I realised

those rabid-dog-like things won’t eat dead humans. Just when I was starting to have

feelings for him, he died; I can still see him from here. Sometimes these things just

bite a person and leave, and sometimes they just eat one whole. Which means

Ganesh might be roaming around among these things out there. We could’ve just

listened to Ganesh and moved to that farmhouse he was telling us all about; on the

outskirts of Pondicherry. All of us would still be here. Now, it's just me. I didn't

grieve my family and friends’ death when it happened but, as I'm writing this, I feel a

tremendous loss. I don't want to cry...

My neck, my left shoulder and the skin around my breasts are hurting a lot from the

burn; I fell into that acidic pond, remember? I’m so tempted to pour water on where

it’s hurting, but I’m rationing the only bit of water I have. I have a lot more other

wounds, and I can’t believe I’ve been enduring all this pain for this long. Back home

in Palmela, I would get very upset over the slightest discomfort.


I wonder how many there are left suffering like me. And if there are, I wish they’re

writing about all of this, this horror and suffering and tragedy. People of the future

must know, if mankind survives. What is happening right now will be part of history.

Just like the dinosaur extinction and both World Wars. This is just a really bad

disease, right? It can be cured, right? It must be. I think we can all agree how selfish

and ignorant we, the human race, are. We fight amongst ourselves, because we hate

one's skin colour or language or gender. But, at times like this, we can't save our

species without embracing unity. Everything is just make-believe, all these borders

and laws and everything. I’m not old enough to ponder about things like these, but it

doesn’t matter. I’m going to die soon anyway.

Okay Diary, it seems like it's time. I can see the sky change colour, the Sun is going

down. I'll just eat the buns, and smoke these cigarettes, as I watch the sky turn dark.

I will lay down and touch myself before I fall asleep. Maybe I will wake up tomorrow,

maybe I won't; but I can feel something bad is going to happen and I don't want to

think about it too much. I don't want to die like this, I still have many things to do. I

could write a list of all things I want to do but right now, I can't.

I hope we made it and saved our world; and this diary might tell the future about all

of this extreme horror and suffering; I hope this diary won’t get destroyed. I will be

part of history among many who have lost their lives and loved ones. It was good

while it lasted.

Goodbye.


With love,

Patrícia Ribeiro


By Navin





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