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Aasmaan Mein Kya Hua

Updated: May 10, 2024

By Bhavya Jain



Aasmaan mein kya Hua


Theme= A boy is in love with a girl whom he sees now almost everywhere , but the twist is he is not sure if she is a real human being or his hallucination , he can also see her in the skies like a fairy …..He is asking to the girl herself …..



= aasmaan mein kya hua, aasmaan mein kya hua..

  tum jo mile toh yeh shabnam gire, hone laga kya mai jaanu,

   kho sa gya hun tumhe dekhke , khudko mai kaise pehchanu mere yaar..

   aasmaan mein kya hua!!


    kya ho tum ek pari , ya koi alag sachchai ho tum,

    kya ho tum asli , ya mera sapna anokha sa ho tum,

     kya ho meri ek kadi , ya us aasmaan mein koi gadbadi!!

    yara sachai tu na hi bata , seh bhi na shayad paaunga,

     mujhme tu bas aise  ghul ja , tujhe mein jeevan jee lunga mere yaar!!.....


     asmaan mein kya hua , aasmaan mein kya hua!!


By Bhavya Jain

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Necro Man
Necro Man
May 23, 2024

Totally wonderful 🎉

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TITAN CRUSH OP
TITAN CRUSH OP
May 23, 2024

Nice 👌👌

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Bhavesh Sinha
Bhavesh Sinha
May 21, 2024

Nice!!

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Samta Jain
Samta Jain
May 21, 2024

Very nice!!

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Creative Writing
Creative Writing
May 20, 2024

Exceptionally well-crafted!


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